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Style / Type: 
freeform

maybe this time around
i’ll sing for my
 supper. try for aesthetic
darwinism.
starve when I have no beauty
to scrape up. and
crumble
under those clouds.

I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Submitted by mark on 14 April 2008 - 11:13pm.
mark's picture

You are marvelous !

Your poem bends and twists nice :) Been trying to scrape up some beauty for weeks now and just can’t find it yet.
Soon the season will fire words or the beauty of the springtime blossoms - hang in there :)
Mark