Lauren ikon
United States
Upon the crutches of sleep,
I stand unsteadily. I see
the horse and rider melding
with trees and leaves,
being spliced like film strips.
My grandfather and his
pocket watch are melting,
as are the memories I
have, stored away behind
an itching nose.
I have an egg in my hand,
and it splatters yellow
paint and cream. I am an
insect, struggling to be
punctual and to be the provider.
I am the combination of object
and subject, of dream and awake,
of past and future, of
communication and it’s void.
I am not a contradiction.
I am an upside-down elephant,
floating atop my reflection. I am
a burning giraffe, and the keeper
of giant combs and green glasses.
I am a hooded lover, and I’ve seen
Christ suspended in arguing
dimensions. In my bedroom,
I have a shattered window with
painted shards.
There are a multitude of men
falling from the sky.
I am a mass of illusion, but a
force of reality. I am the
watcher of fish-head
mermaids, the cruel inversion.
I am the metamorphosis.

i really like it
i love this great imagery. i look forward to reading the rest of your work.
Yes, I love the craziness.
Yes, I love the craziness. Geat images, you really went for
sureal here and it works fine.
I think you need a stronger ending though. Stick
with the humorous and quirky til the end.
Like it!
All the best
eric