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Lauren ikon

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St. Louis, Missouri,
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Upon the crutches of sleep,
I stand unsteadily.  I see
the horse and rider melding
with trees and leaves,
being spliced like film strips.

My grandfather and his
pocket watch are melting,
as are the memories I
have, stored away behind
an itching nose. 

I have an egg in my hand,
and it splatters yellow
paint and cream.  I am an
insect, struggling to be
punctual and to be the provider.

I am the combination of object
and subject, of dream and awake,
of past and future, of
communication and it’s void.

I am not a contradiction. 

I am an upside-down elephant,
floating atop my reflection.  I am
a burning giraffe, and the keeper
of giant combs and green glasses.

I am a hooded lover, and I’ve seen
Christ suspended in arguing
dimensions.  In my bedroom,
I have a shattered window with
painted shards. 

There are a multitude of men
falling from the sky.

I am a mass of illusion, but a
force of reality.  I am the
watcher of  fish-head
mermaids, the cruel inversion.

I am the metamorphosis.

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Submitted by musicguru on 10 March 2008 - 12:44am.
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i really like it

i love this great imagery. i look forward to reading the rest of your work.

Submitted by eric ashford on 10 March 2008 - 9:20am.
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Yes, I love the craziness.

Yes, I love the craziness. Geat images, you really went for
sureal here and it works fine.

I think you need a stronger ending though. Stick
with the humorous and quirky til the end.

Like it!

All the best

eric