Redemption In The Dark
C,A.Tetro /Zandrew26(Andrew Torn)
A path that love has forged
Wreckage strewn and dark
To fill this vessel drained
To kindle fire without a spark
In the aftermath of turmoil only shadows remain
No more the light and warmth can dwell
Within these walls of a living shell
The offerings he sees will be his bane
A plague be upon them that would defame
And this tainted love he will take to his grave
To quell the longing of an empty heart
Let this fortress he has built play it’s part
The King has cursed his name
Only one card remains, the queen of hearts
And alone the jack stands accused
Waiting for redemption in the dark
Hello,
This is exquisite loneliness. My favorite lines are:
“A plague be upon them that would defame
And this tainted love he will take to his grave
To quell the longing of an empty heart
Let this fortress he has built play it’s part”
Congratulations, the two of you work well together!
Cat
Thank you Cat
And thank you on Andrews behalf
as with all my co writes no one will know who wrote what
this one was a bit more difficult to write
but it came together in the end
Chrys
cool
thanks chrys for the oppurtunity to write one with you and thanks for putting up with my prima donna ways while writing it
Andrew
My pleasure prima donna lol
thanks for working with me on this one
“I believe in the best of both worlds mixing old and new”
Chrys
gary
Thank you
Chrys