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Submitted by poewriter58 on 5 March 2008 - 8:10pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
Not asking for a lifetime, only for one night
searching for the right chords
That would make this song turn right
Not for a lifetime, but for a day
I’ll never ask if I should stay
Not for a lifetime, but for a day
That’s all I’ll ask , then be on my way
From Main Street to Montgomery
Listen to the motors roar
To tempt a sleeping heart to wake
I’d beat a footpath to your door
Talk with me awhile
See what time may bring
Not asking for a lifetime
Not asking for a ring
Walk with me awhile
Through a land of what might be
Not asking for a lifetime , just have this need to be
release)
And I’ll just go on believing
That one day I’ll find the key
That unlocks a hidden heart
That is longing to be free
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
basic d a g c pattern
release is am em
4/4 timing for those that know music
I would love to hear this
I would love to hear this set to music.
Lyric writing is a special skill.
Good poetry also.
All the best
eric
Eric
I truly appreciate your comments that means quite a lot coming from you
thank you kindly
Chrys
Hey Chrys,
I remember reading this beautiful set of lyrics on the other site. I can’t help but think about the words and the meanings… lovely and sad.
Cat
Thanks Cat
I had a reason for posting it here at this time I think I have the music worked out next I work on yours
Chrys