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Submitted by Candlewitch on Sat, 02/23/2008 - 22:08.| Updated 24 February 2008 - 5:09pm.
  Moon, Stars, and planets awaken to the nightPatiently their lights awaited…The watcher in me rewardedBy this heavenly display beyondThe sight of soft tingling fire in the skiesMeanwhile, back on Earth…~*~His truth was night lights in the harbor mooringsThe mind’s picture of a moment standingThough the sea casts a glisteningGlimpse of desire to ebb tide.Light chimes on boats coming and goingwith mirror blades hidden in high tideWhile on shore…~*~Steady amidst the licking flamesOf the flickering campfire,Lie embers in a bed of hot glowing coals.There’s a time to tally the scoreTo rally and circle the wagonsStir and replenish the fire once more.
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Submitted by poewriter58 on Wed, 03/05/2008 - 20:24.

my twice cents

Hey Cat this must have been posted while I was away as always you have outdone yourself beautiful work and I heartily agree with Ronda good writing but then I would expect nothing less from you Chrys
Submitted by Candlewitch on Wed, 03/05/2008 - 20:39.

Hey Chrys,

Thanks for your vote of confidence, it means much to me!Cat
Submitted by electricblue on Wed, 03/05/2008 - 12:50.

Fragile connections

Hi CatThis is amazing so alike my poems we seem to use the same words i am a stargazer i love the stars the sunrise the sunset i travel the universe it is neverending my friendThis is so tender so colourful i love all the elements seen and unkseenlove and hugsMaggie R
Submitted by Candlewitch on Wed, 03/05/2008 - 20:15.

Hey Maggie!

I had a feeling that this poem would appeal to you, knowing your lovely style as I do. Thank you so very much!Hugs, Cat
Submitted by Rob Graber on Thu, 02/28/2008 - 21:05.

Great imagery! In a most

Great imagery! In a most attractive text, line 5 seems to me especially lovely…
Submitted by Candlewitch on Thu, 02/28/2008 - 22:36.

Thanks!

Thank you so much! It was nice of you to tell me what you liked about my poem/prose. I’ll be seeing you around,Cat
Submitted by Snpdrgon on Thu, 02/28/2008 - 14:16.

beautiful!

love the images, and the moral at the end; so true.xxx Lisa~
Submitted by Candlewitch on Thu, 02/28/2008 - 22:33.

Hi Lisa!

Thank you dear girl. Did I tell you that you have great eyes? Very soulful! Take care of yourself,Cat
Submitted by pinksheep on Thu, 02/28/2008 - 13:39.

Cat

Thank you for your response above it gave me a buzz - pink
Submitted by Candlewitch on Wed, 02/27/2008 - 22:32.

Hello pinksheep!

Thank you so very much for reading my poem and taking the time to make helpful suggestions! I am looking forward to reading more of your work!Cat
Submitted by pinksheep on Wed, 02/27/2008 - 20:06.

Great you have talent

Would meanwhile on earth or meanwhile on the earth be better? Would taking beyond off the 4th line be better?-of the 1st stanza-This poem is like a buttercup seeping in the white sunshine pinksheep regards
Submitted by Candlewitch on Sun, 02/24/2008 - 22:13.

Ronda

Nice to see you! Thanks for the help… you should be a proof reader! I hope that all is going right in your life and you are well. Best wishes, Cat
Submitted by RSScheerer on Mon, 02/25/2008 - 00:26.

Great to see you, too!

No problem as far as the help. I always worry that I’m too particular when it comes to proofreading and editing! I’m happy that you’ve joined our “little” community! Can’t wait to read more of your work. ~ Ronda
Submitted by RSScheerer on Sun, 02/24/2008 - 01:43.

Nice technique, Cat

I like the shift between frames. It adds depth to this piece. Nice! Fix one small punctuation issue, “light’s” can lose the apostrophe. ~ Ronda