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L ife is to short

Every moment should be counted

Till there are no more minutes left

 

Yesterday no longer is

Only more tomorrows

Until that day should it ever be

Remember all that has been spoken

 

Heed the murmurs and the whispers

End the endless wanting

Awaken your sleeping heart

Relive the feelings you have forsaken

Try a brand new start

 

Truth will always follow

Regain what you think you have lost

Your heart will always beat, so listen

 

To the rhythm that it makes

Of all the times that it lay broken

 

Let it take another chance

In it’s most sacred chambers

Veiled in unheard words

Echoes of the softest beating

 

Awaiting to be heard

Give a voice to the tempo

Awake and living still

Inside the soul of an angel

Now is the time to live again

Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Extended Acrostic-- read each letter down for the title
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Average: 4 (3 votes)
Submitted by themoonman on 22 February 2008 - 3:11pm.
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Well then...

Very impressive…my hat is off..thanks for sharing with me.

Submitted by poewriter58 on 22 February 2008 - 3:48pm.
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Thank you

I just took a bow
Now it is your turn
Chrys

Submitted by Tragic_Magic on 22 February 2008 - 9:22pm.
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really liked it....

so i really liked it and your writing is on a level i hope to reach one day.$DEY KNOW$

Submitted by poewriter58 on 22 February 2008 - 9:54pm.
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Thank you

Now that was quite a compliment , thank you you keep writing
I’ve been doing this for years, it takes time you are showing potential
Chrys

Submitted by poewriter58 on 22 March 2008 - 4:39am.
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Gary

Didn’t see this as I was getting ready to go on vacation when you posted this comment
Thank you
Chrys