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Submitted by poewriter58 on 22 February 2008 - 11:25am.| Updated 22 February 2008 - 4:04pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
L ife is to short
Every moment should be counted
Till there are no more minutes left
Yesterday no longer is
Only more tomorrows
Until that day should it ever be
Remember all that has been spoken
Heed the murmurs and the whispers
End the endless wanting
Awaken your sleeping heart
Relive the feelings you have forsaken
Try a brand new start
Truth will always follow
Regain what you think you have lost
Your heart will always beat, so listen
To the rhythm that it makes
Of all the times that it lay broken
Let it take another chance
In it’s most sacred chambers
Veiled in unheard words
Echoes of the softest beating
Awaiting to be heard
Give a voice to the tempo
Awake and living still
Inside the soul of an angel
Now is the time to live again
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Extended Acrostic-- read each letter down for the title
(3 votes)

Well then...
Very impressive…my hat is off..thanks for sharing with me.
Thank you
I just took a bow
Now it is your turn
Chrys
really liked it....
so i really liked it and your writing is on a level i hope to reach one day.$DEY KNOW$
Thank you
Now that was quite a compliment , thank you you keep writing
I’ve been doing this for years, it takes time you are showing potential
Chrys
Gary
Didn’t see this as I was getting ready to go on vacation when you posted this comment
Thank you
Chrys