We are ready
at 2:05 P.M.
to waltz through Gate A,
and receive our beach hats
emblazoned with Chief Wahoo,
and the Plain Dealer -
as long as we’ll shill their rag.
This afternoon Joshua and I
are up in section 519,
the nosebleeds,
the cheap seats,
the best part of the ballpark.
I love real people,
and here’s where we’ll find them.
“Get your oxygen tank, son.
We’re goin’ for a hike!”
Really, I don’t know what possesed me
to take the Ontario Street ramp,
but it’s 30 stories up.
Where’s that famed energy I had when I was his age?
It’s right there,
running 25 feet ahead,
and pulling away.
The grandstand levels are assembled
in such a way that look sturdy and out of place
and are suspended
just 10 feet above my head in places.
Oh! If they should fall!
White steel and concrete hold our rebirth together.
You see,
on this little corner
at Ontario and Carnegie
I see the rebirth of my once proud city.
The 1990’s were a flash in the pan,
nothing can survive here on entertainment,
nor $3.75 hot dogs.
Still, 40,000 people in one place
can make me dream of better times.
Last night’s game
featured fireworks set to the Beach Boys.
Unfortunately,
the Indians still lost,
as they did today.
And the hot dogs are still
$3.75.
Submitted by conect11 on 16 June 2007 - 11:59pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
kinda threw it out there. Needs more work when I'm sober, maybe even a complete rewrite.
(3 votes)
Nicely done!
I am with Joe on this one. Good solid piece. I can “HEAR IT” being performed. If you have a venue where you can perform it, do so. I don’t know about spicing the wording up…but I liked it a lot.
-David
Work, stretch, take risks, visualize your future. Become the poet you have always longed to be. All that is needed is honest effort.-DSB
Interesting that though I don't even know
what sort of sporting event it was (baseball?) or what “shill their rag” means or even what it is like to have a son, it still worked for me.
cheers
it's a newspaper
FYI
Soccer is the 3rd most popular football code here after Rugby League and Australian Rules and we don’t need any goals, homeruns, tries or touchdowns to get drunk on beer and eat meat pies!
cheers
nice!
lol, what’s been up, Jess?
you know
I used to play “sandlot rugby” with my High School friends. Now that is a sport that is sadly underappreciated in my country, bloody, brutal, and dirty. I wish we had more of it here.
it is
baseball, and “shill the rag” means to advertise a newspaper that you don’t respect. The Plain Dealer (our local “rag” or newspaper gave away free beach hats emblazoned with their logo to all fans who came to the ballgame.