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Barbara Writes

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South Carolina,
United States

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freeform

I find my place in life
nothing but self
running for the gusto
getting satisfaction
from the best

learned to be me
letting go the ropes
causing me to dangle
kicking to be free from
others point of view

Not accepted by the cliche
refusing to be molded
labeled by society
I go it alone
Not fitting in the puzzle

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Submitted by poewriter58 on 18 February 2008 - 9:20am.
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well done

small typo fitting
very well written from the point of view of independence I can identify with this work
Chrys

Submitted by Janice Pearce on 18 February 2008 - 9:24pm.
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Can relate to this also!

Keep kicking! Nice ~Janice~