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Candlewitch

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MidWest USA,
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Early evening’s

heavy mist

rolls in

at the crossroads

gateway from

the land of the living

to the nihility

of the dead.

Oh, lucky shade

With the obol

under your tongue,

one sixth of a drachma.

For this paltry fee,

Charon the Ferryman

Will carry thee

across the river Styx;

Drop Ye by the river Lethe

For a refreshing drink

Of sweet oblivious amnesia

To cool and soothe thy brow.

Ye, who died a hero’s death,

Travel on to Elysian Fields

With all the blessings

Of the Gods and Goddesses.

Finding truth in the mist

Of the myths of long ago…

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Submitted by poewriter58 on 12 February 2008 - 6:43pm.
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wow

I see our mutual friend is at it again Cat. Not going to touch this one you know how I feel about Styx
excellent writing keep this up
Chrys

Submitted by Candlewitch on 15 February 2008 - 3:00pm.
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I know I can always count on you

Hey Chrys, You guessed it. I should know by now that you can spot my Styx a mile away. I’m really flattered that you recognized my alter ego!
Cat

Submitted by asiajy on 29 February 2008 - 9:48am.
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!!!

This is breathtaking. I don’t even know who Styx is, but I love the imagery.

Submitted by Candlewitch on 1 March 2008 - 9:57am.
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Hello!

Styx is my male alter ego. Sometimes it is good to write from a different perspective.
Thank you for your comment on my poem, “Paradise of the Dead.”

Cat