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Submitted by Candlewitch on 12 February 2008 - 5:28pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
Early evening’s
heavy mist
rolls in
at the crossroads
gateway from
the land of the living
to the nihility
of the dead.
Oh, lucky shade
With the obol
under your tongue,
one sixth of a drachma.
For this paltry fee,
Charon the Ferryman
Will carry thee
across the river Styx;
Drop Ye by the river Lethe
For a refreshing drink
Of sweet oblivious amnesia
To cool and soothe thy brow.
Ye, who died a hero’s death,
Travel on to Elysian Fields
With all the blessings
Of the Gods and Goddesses.
Finding truth in the mist
Of the myths of long ago…
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(3 votes)

wow
I see our mutual friend is at it again Cat. Not going to touch this one you know how I feel about Styx
excellent writing keep this up
Chrys
I know I can always count on you
Hey Chrys, You guessed it. I should know by now that you can spot my Styx a mile away. I’m really flattered that you recognized my alter ego!
Cat
!!!
This is breathtaking. I don’t even know who Styx is, but I love the imagery.
Hello!
Styx is my male alter ego. Sometimes it is good to write from a different perspective.
Thank you for your comment on my poem, “Paradise of the Dead.”
Cat