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Submitted by calliope on 5 February 2008 - 2:12pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
All i can say is I love you,
I send it in gold threaded bags,
These magic bags will never spill,
They’re always full ,so take your fill,
For though we may be miles apart,
You’ll always have love wrapped around your heart,
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
My sister [half] just lost her mother and this is for her
Thoughtful
and I like the bag metaphor.
every now and then the poet uses verse to relate to others in sad times to let them know there are words other then sympathic ,to write that is an exercise in communication…the card industry would be challenged to do something different.
In ink,
David
Prophetic perhaps
Lacy, although I hope the one who it is actually written for both knows and appreciates what has been given. Keith
Perhaps...
Dear professor, perhaps it was a bit prophetic,for I would send this to another loved one as well.
Truly,
Lacy,
Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.