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Fthillsboomer

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Send me east in the morning

Let me face that rising sun

Send me east as to wedding feast

Though there’s fighting to be done

 

Let me rise up with glory

And find my way to you

Make me ham and eggs and coffee

Like the way you used to do

 

Then send me on my merry way

Giving kiss and hug goodbye

Knowing it’s you I’m thinking of

As off to war I fly

 

Send me east in the morning

To lands of death and shame

Where cultures clash and warriors dash

And IEDs kill and maim

 

Send me east in the morning

And tell me that it’s true

That being here is meaningful

It counts; this thing I do

 

Then send me west in evening

Back to family, home and wife

And tell me that the things I’ve done

Helped make a better life

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Submitted by poewriter58 on 3 February 2008 - 4:28pm.
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Bravo

This is written so well, it should be the anthem of all those fighting and allthat have fought to make that difference you speak of
Chrys

Submitted by fthillsboomer on 3 February 2008 - 10:38pm.
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Thanks

This ole Viet vet scribbler thanks you

Submitted by IKnowNoBox on 3 February 2008 - 5:24pm.
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Wow The progression of stanzas is spot on.

the language is clear non-partisan,this poem in for the foot soldier,the ship soldier and the air soldier.

In ink,
Dabbler

Submitted by fthillsboomer on 3 February 2008 - 10:47pm.
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Thanks

There was a saying in Nam. Bullets have no politics.

Submitted by ladytheresa on 31 December 1969 - 7:00pm.
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Excellence!!

ladytheresa Extremely well written and poignant, this piece IS THE VOICE of many. LadyTheresa
Submitted by fthillsboomer on 4 February 2008 - 2:23am.
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Thankyou

Thankyou mam. did you pick up on the Jewel reference in Common tones?