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Barbara Writes
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Submitted by Barbara Writes on 2 February 2008 - 11:03am.| Updated 14 May 2008 - 8:47am.
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Haiku: 3|5|3 Love of Basketball
Let’s play ball
Gym class on the court
Foot in cast
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
(2 votes)
I apologise for the low vote
A vote of one means to me it needs a lot more.
What are you really trying to say?
Most of us had had sports injuries but what were your feelings? Could you have been a contender? Should gym classes be safer? Is it a metaphor for trying your best and getting hurt?
Gimme more, please
cheers,
Jess
no none of that
My fifteen year old is in a cast my brother in law two nephews are in cast all happen in last two month just writing because injuries are part of life. No special meaning of concern pro or con. Didn’t mean to offend. Will revise.
LOL (or at least a big grin)
No offense taken. I can be blunt in my comments but never try to be hurtful.
Good luck on the re-write.
cheers,
Jess
Blunt dosen't bother me
I like knowing when what I say or write may be misunderstood by other. Hope it makes a better communicator and writer. I tend to have an sensitive conscience.
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I am beginning to value Brevity more and more.
Thanks Whitetea
Smiles:)
Barbara
I like brief too, then I can be a little to brief at time
Appreciate you reading and commenting.
Your comment remind me to take a look at this again.
haiku is brief, thinking about making it that instead.