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Crypticbard
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Submitted by crypticbard on 1 February 2008 - 3:03am.
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freeform
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faceless number
screen flicker
thermal print out
fades in summer
walk the line
find some time
primal scream
stuccoed spring
mudprint carpet
trigger finger
curdled milk
forgotten winter
stadium heckler
prison clatter
barred existence
cushions the fall
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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~Great work~
Hello,
You have a creative and unique style… very nice!
Cat
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I like your streaming of conciousness here.