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Submitted by fthillsboomer on 30 January 2008 - 3:11pm.| Updated 30 January 2008 - 4:02pm.
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People speak words, shout words, scream words, dream words
People say words, pray words, think words, wink words
People write words, print words, show words, know words
People make words, take words, hear words, fear words
People send words, mend words, receive words, believe words
People hate words, date words, oppose words, suppose words
People type words and swipe words, they snipe words and gripe words
Others sneer words and steer words, some leer words and peer words
People scrawl words and awl words, they scratch words and catch words
I’ve been known to pencil a word or two myself
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
OK there it is
(1 vote)
