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Submitted by weirdelf on 14 June 2007 - 5:58am.
Once I saw a man in a suit knocked down by a car
He went rolling along the road,
one shoe went off in another direction.
He rolled into a sitting position,
he had a small package in his hand.
He raised it to his ear and shook it.
Then he said fuckit
and fell over and didn’t move any more.
So sue me,
I laughed.
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thanks guys
yeah, this really happened and, I am a bit ashamed to say now, I really laughed. I was a spiky top punk at the time and the sight of this materialist suit checking his property before he collapsed really cracked me up
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in just a short bit you added incredible detail to this. You start out as a dispassionate observer, and conclude with something twisted, and funny. Was this from a real life experience?
hit and run
this is amazing
humourful
reminds me of that movie Pursuit of Happiness
or Pursuit of Happiness reminds me of your
poem
they both give me smiles
the black humour
like that great movie Catch-22
Orgami loves this poem!!