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Barbara Writes
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Submitted by Barbara Writes on 28 January 2008 - 3:06am.| Updated 3 February 2008 - 1:04am.
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Grumpy Is
Grumpy is crouching at the door
Bottled up
Sudden Outburst
Enter peaceful bliss
Grumpy makes her appearance
From behind dark eyes
Breaks silence
At the drop of a hat
Grumpy is emotions repress
Hidden cries
Watching empty vases
With no roses
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Grumpy Is
Enjoyed this Barb, think you could expand on this Gem?
Thanks for your comment
That sounds good any ideas
To open it up try Grumpy
work grumpy is into the poem with
grumply has…
grumpmy sees…
grumpy etc.
catchy analogy.
IN ink,
dabbler
expand
I agree this is only a start expand on it what else makes grumpy grumpy and how do they get out of that mood might be something to consider how did grumpy become grumpy in every way what were they before they were grumpy
I would like to see the finished product look forward to it
Chrys
Really appreciate your suggestion
Will work on it. Algebra is killing me about now
and database is wonderfully challenging.