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Crypticbard

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West Moreton, Queensland,
Australia

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word painting

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if a picture paints a thousand words
and with words a poet a picture paints
then a poet’s thousand though one picture paint
will have painted a thousand more

paint with words - use them bright and dark
loud and silent, whispery or brazen
paint in broad strokes or with fine
from thoughts to words to pictures sublime

if a poem is a picture of words made
then a poet’s mind a varied brocade
and with words a picture a poet paints
a painter with words a poet paints

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Submitted by frangipangi on 26 January 2008 - 7:20pm.
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words and pictures

Very nice picture you painted. A real word smith. flow and continuity. rhythm and rhyme. Thought provoking.
Yours,
frangipangi