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Submitted by crypticbard on 26 January 2008 - 6:53pm.| Updated 26 January 2008 - 6:53pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
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on a dismal cloud-filled sky
that darkened a summer day
not a single drop of moisture:
for far too long green remains brown
drown the farmhand’s hopes
barren clouds that litter blue skies
bristling fingers maraud the land
far too long from brown to green
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