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Submitted by calliope on 25 January 2008 - 8:36pm.
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freeform
The demon’s kiss has been bestowed.
Destiny now comes into play,
The chosen has been summoned,
And now must be shown the way,
Only he can remove the mark,
The demon has left behind,
Only he can follow the pull,
Of the girl he’s meant to find,
He does not understand this pull,
His intuition his only guide,
He only knows danger is near,
It’s coming with the tide,
The two shall meet,
They must find the spark,
Only then can he remove the mark,
The prophecy must be fulfilled,
For this is what the Gods have willed.
A prophecy
You’ve written a very talented piece and remained consistent with your title. I like the story within this poem from beginning to end.
A minor note regarding “Gods,” usually the word is only capitalized when referring to one god. Sometimes it is nothing more than the writer’s preference, though.
~ Ronda