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Barbara Writes
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Submitted by Barbara Writes on 25 January 2008 - 12:46am.
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freeform
Among friends
I am a small hand
Inside a large glove
Artistically incline
I see the world
Not as others do
Making friends
Like sunrise and sunset
I ride the moon
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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I see the world not as
I see the world not as others do. I can relate to this very closely. I like the way you have expressed so much in so few lines. Nice work.
Kaz
It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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I wrote this because sometimes I think I am the only on the planet me.
Planet me is a great place
Planet me is a great place to be. lol - I sometimes feel like that too. Most of us do methinks! Nice work :-)
Kaz
It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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So short and yet beautiful, It took me there, Nicely written
Nice, unlike....
the anger I see in much of your poetry. Keep your spirit like this, please, anger suits no one, but s*** does happen I know. This poem reflects an inner beauty nicely. We all see things through our own prism on the world, that is fo sure. There is your truth, my truth and the real, honest truth. Keepw writing like this more. :)
Patrick/AO
thanks for you insight
I am amgry often than not. Expressing in words is the only way to to carry away from me. I annoy people this is probably what they see evem when I think I’m positive. Really appreciate your
you honesty.