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Submitted by poewriter58 on 22 January 2008 - 10:32am.| Updated 22 January 2008 - 10:34am.
Style / Type:
freeform
Acutely tuned senses at the mere mention of a name
Merciless winds of emotional change
Only serve to fan the flames
Of a fervent desire to be
All that I want, all that I need, all that I am
Can become muddled by touching the hand
Of one so wild and wired
The determinant agent of imaginations fire
Blazing a luminous trail to a heart
As rogue emotions pulse and surge through my conscience mind
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
Please do not critique mechanics. The inconsistencies in style are intentional, or correcting them is not important to me.
This is the title poem of my new book and the subject for this poem is very close to me
yes
i loved the title, i loved your language use, and i even loved your lack of punctuation… it fit nicely.
puctuation
Thank you for your very kind comments freestyle , free form , free verse does not require it.
thanks again very kind of you
Chrys