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   The hallway was silent except for the far off drone of a lawnmower which summoned to the mind of Miranda Penniwinkle the picture of a gigantic bumble bee, lazily buzzing searching for a giant flower, it’s huge girth casting a giant shadow upon the earth and the draft from it’s massive wings creating whirlwinds uprooting trees, lifting cars and lawn furniture in it’s quake, an ominous and dark mass of stuff trailing behind the behemoth. Miranda could feel the swoosh and draft as the drone filled her ears and became so loud she could not think. The hairs were rising on back of her neck and real terror gripped her gut when she looked up to see Mr. Tandy standing over her, his pale, thin frame casting a narrow shadow across her face. He was unusually cross and yelling, “ Ms Penniwinkle! WAKE UP!” Miranda jumped out of the seat and nearly stood at attention.

Submitted by IKnowNoBox on 20 January 2008 - 6:25pm.
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ah yes the day dreamer

slip away artist
fade away at will
to witness
all that is between
the realms…

Well written,

Dabbler

Submitted by frangipangi on 21 January 2008 - 2:20pm.
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day dreamer

Thank you Dabbler.

Submitted by IKnowNoBox on 21 January 2008 - 7:53pm.
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i like the Bold type Wake-up

like coming across the portel.

Submitted by weirdelf on 24 June 2008 - 5:07am.
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I want more!

Miranda Penniwinkle could be an intriguing character. A kind of tormented Walter Mitty. Unfortunately Neopoet is not the place for long stories, it is too much of an eyestrain to read off screen and I can’t afford an E-book ($800 in Australia!)
Post the full version to me by email, you can do that from “Contact” on my profile,

cheers,
Jess