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Japanese

Five beats for the line
seven beats for the big lie
last line also five.

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Submitted by weirdelf on 10 June 2007 - 2:28am.
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Rhyming haiku?

Five rhymes for the times
Seven vodkas, ice and limes
Five poems five dimes

Submitted by conect11 on 10 June 2007 - 8:17am.

ah!

excellent stuff, weirdelf!

Submitted by weirdelf on 10 June 2007 - 4:43am.
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I've decided to submit the rhyming haiku

Thanks for the inspiration