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Barbara Writes
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Submitted by Barbara Writes on 6 January 2008 - 11:21pm.| Updated 6 January 2008 - 11:21pm.
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A kiss so soft our lips drips like honey
Your touch makes me shine like the sun
Holding me close I see the fire burning
Behind the sun. I feel the wind blow
The waves clashes the full moon rise
Like a comet burning bright in the night
I see the light in you eyes
As the rain falls we dance in the moonlight
A kiss so soft the river flow the wave rolls in
The storm rages in your eyes
As we danced away the night
The sun sets darkness takes over
You rode your motorcycle straight up to my door
Off in the night we rode to the mountains
The snow top mountains the rugged steeps
We sat at the foot watching its glory
Kissing softly under the moon
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a tender moment
evoking memories and dreams of many like it. Sweet and lovely.
~ Ronda