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Submitted by Barbara Writes on 4 January 2008 - 10:12pm.| Updated 5 January 2008 - 2:21pm.

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freeform

I climb the highest mountain

Leaving behind worlds trouble

Free from all pains inflicted

Slipping to the bottom

I lay quiet looking to the heavens

As life flashes by

On the wings of a bird

All worries fly away

I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Average: 5 (1 vote)

Submitted by amilu on 5 January 2008 - 6:15am.

nice poem…. can be a little more discriptive :)

Submitted by Barbara Writes on 5 January 2008 - 9:44am.

I will do this

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