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Just a look,

And the world shook,

A smile,

Would hold me over for a while,

Your touch,

Is what I loved so much,

Your kiss,

I knew I’d miss,

I cried,

The day you died.

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Submitted by weirdelf on 10 November 2007 - 12:57pm.
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That person may have died

but this poem feels like fiction
If it is allegory it does not work
cheers,
Jess