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Submitted by calliope on 24 October 2007 - 5:21pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
She’s lost her way a hundred times
She’s fallen so hard ,yet,still she climbs
Her pride won’t let her stop
She must make it to the top
She has to see the view
Anything less will not do
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
(1 vote)
a good
simple sentiment set in an average poem.
Mark W.
To View or not to View...
Lost in her own pride I’d say. It feels like something is missing or not completed in this one. Sorry, but not as well done as some of your others but a noble effort.