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As death trembles upon thy lips

I bend and lay a kiss

As a soul and mind slowly slips

I bend and lay a kiss

 

As death takes those of innocent eyes

Where purity lies

They slowly die

 

Yet,do the angels cry?

 

Sometimes ,I hear

The screams of the dear

Souls that have departed

Yet,whenever I do

I think of the truth

Of the young and broken-hearted

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Please do not critique mechanics. The inconsistencies in style are intentional, or correcting them is not important to me.
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Submitted by IKnowNoBox on 26 October 2007 - 10:58pm.
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As death Takes those of innocent eyes

Lacy you spark the light to my candle Thank you.

In ink,
I Know No Box