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I have made a miraculous discovery,

A divine revelation, if you would,

A stunning and sudden clarity,

Of all things natural and created,

A system of unknown systematic function,

A heaven sent train of thought,

A crying out of truth,

A design fate has revealed to me,

 

And festooned in such knowledge and wisdom,

I only wish I could remember…

…exactly what it was.

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Submitted by IKnowNoBox on 18 October 2007 - 3:33pm.
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Lacy I continue to be amused and humbled...

by your verses of the human condition,
I had a lot more to express take my word for it….
You’ll have to It slipped my mind.

This is rich Lacy.Seriously entertaining.

In ink,
Dabbler

Submitted by calliope on 19 October 2007 - 9:38am.
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Thanks NoBox

I knew you would be amused by this one.I thought we could all use a good chuckle in the midst of all the seriousness.
Keep on keepin’ on!
Lacy,

Submitted by weirdelf on 19 October 2007 - 6:52am.
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ROFL!

Oh how many times has this happened to me! Substances or dreams usually involved.
This spoke to me, a delightful piece!
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by calliope on 19 October 2007 - 9:49am.
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Thanks Jess

Your right.This is a reaccurring theme in my life ,and dreams and substances are the usual suspects,Glad you liked it.
Lacy,