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Submitted by Ifoundaplace on 8 February 2010 - 7:58pm.| Updated 8 February 2010 - 7:01pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
Leaving you is hard
I will forever be scarred
We are now split up
And I still cut
It hurts me inside
To know that you will confide
In someone who is not me
Who will never be what I tried to be
I will still always be here for you
And I will always stay true
You will always be a part of me
that only you will see
You were my best friend
It will be that way ‘til the end
Don’t let anyone take my place
No one will ever face
The special times we shared
you have always cared
Now all our memories locked up tight
And each one of our fights
The laughs, the tears, the cries, the fears
Have built up through the years
I never thought we’d part
You will always remain in my heart.
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Please do not critique mechanics. The inconsistencies in style are intentional, or correcting them is not important to me.
My best friend(Guy) and I had a big fight/misunderstanding, and ever since, it hasn't been the same, I Love him, I miss him, and I wish it were any other way but this..
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Nice one Hunter
I like the way this was worded and the feel of it. Such a warm hearted poem to one who made you so happy and a memory that will stay but be painful at the same time. You are a courageous writer and keep up the good works. There was only one line it bothered me was this one I still cut. What does that mean?
Making dinner see you in chat possibly later on.
Magics02
Mona
That line, it means that at the time I wrote this poem, I was meaning to say that I still cut myself. Like self-harm. I hurt myself and this experience made it worse, so therefore, that is why I chose that line.
Understood my friend very much
Thanks for the reply back and I know your on your way to happier days just be true to yourself, dont let others validate who you are and remember Determination Means Success. Kudos to your writing and keep it coming.
Stay warm up there!!
Magics02
Thumbs up
I don’t use stars. It could use a little polish. But the emotions are there. That’s what I like in a poem. Keep writting and reading other poet’s work. And have fun and SMILE!. huey
hi
Could see that this was a deep felt poem, loved it.
Very sad...
I hope you’ll always have this friend in your life. It sounds like you shared a lot together and that never goes away.
Rosina
xena465
Yes Xena
We did share a lot together at the time. And those feelings are still there even though we can’t be friends. There are issues there that just can’t be resolved so for now, we will live on as acquintances and maybe some day we will become closer again. We have tried and we have to keep going our seperate ways. But n o matter what, he will always be there for me if I need him. Whether we are friends or not and that means the world to me.
Dani. (: