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Barbara Writes

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Haiti

An earthquake ravish island
Once the populace for cruise ships
Now devastated completely leveled
Millions homeless living in the street
Waiting hopefully for relief items

Grief stricken looters hunt for food
The desperate fall to their knees
Begging god to help them
Children singing songs dancing in the streets
Trying to cope and endure the trials of destruction

Dead loved ones piled high in the streets
Buried in mass graves no record of them process
Babies pulled from collapsed buildings
Children pass through the arms of rescuer
Adults carried away to safety on stretchers

Survivors praising god for the safe return of their love ones
The tortured asking god why
The bewildered silently staring at nothing
Beyoncé singing “Halo” at the “Hope for Haiti Now” telethon
Country singers singing “Lean on me “as the world pitched in to help

Madonna singing my favorite song “I want to Take You there”
Jennifer Hudson singing “Let it be” for the broken-hearted
Many rivers to cross those in Haiti must travel
People from all the inhabited earth come together in songs
Raising money for Haiti
 

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
The "Hope for Haiti Now" Telethon inspired me to write this poem.
Submitted by Ann Harvey on 23 January 2010 - 4:31am.
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when the earth's plates move, we are helpless.

A nice report, we stand and read and see and feel and die a little
for those who suffered this freak of nature, this inevitable happening
when the earth’s plates move, we are helpless. It is sad, it is heart-wrenching
it is terrifying, we stretch out to help, but that doesn’t quiet the suffering
of the one man-woman-or child-still there deep beneath the rubble, suffering.
Perhaps the songs can soothe this utter pain, and if telepathy works
he has his sensitive healers in all the humans that still walk the earth.

What can one do but stand and watch, give money, yes but the anguish
is not sated with money.

Love to you Barbara and to all those in pain be it from an earthquake or otherwise.
Ann

Submitted by Millage on 23 January 2010 - 10:36am.
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Moving

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A very moving piece Barbaba. It captures the devestation and heartache very well.A great write.

Much love
Millage x

Submitted by whitetea on 2 February 2010 - 10:33pm.
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it is tough to be on the

it is tough to be on the outside looking in at what happened to haiti. such a horrible thing down there. i hope a recovery is soon in sight.

Submitted by Barbara Writes on 22 February 2010 - 3:10pm.
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Thanks all

thanks for the comments I really appreciate it

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If you don’t like it, can’t talk about it, then write about it.

Respectfully
Yours,
Barbara

Submitted by chumfin on 28 March 2010 - 3:49pm.
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bless you

its really great to se you bring comfort to the distressed with the power in your poetic talents. God bles you for the poem

chumfin