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Submitted by docmaverick on 14 September 2007 - 2:56am.| Updated 14 September 2007 - 3:56am.
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Dreams of maturity
while still so young,
songs of free love
were songs being sung;
tapestry thought patterns
indulging cheap wine,
billowing smoke
expanding your mind;
political talk
with nothing to fear,
living a day at a time
year after year;
the sixties and seventies
were in thier own way,
too much information
leaving nothing to say.
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Agreed,
IKnow
Disagree, respectfully
We did make a difference in the ’60s. The world would be a much harsher place if we hadn’t promoted love, life and the planet.
cheers,
Jess