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Submitted by docmaverick on 13 September 2007 - 3:52am.
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It’s absolutely essential
it can even be your friend,
and it’s right there with you
when you start or when you end.
It can even surprise you
often yeilding a treasure,
like sands through the hourglass
time is but an increment of measure.
It can work against you, too
breathing down your back,
it keeps on running
even when you’re way off track.
But, if you breathe life into it
it will steal your pleasure,
like sands through the hourglass
time is but an increment of measure.
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
surprisingly deep
surprising only because the form is so hallmarky,
sorry man, my personal opinion.
cheers,
Jess
Ideas of soup opera and yes time is a vast subject.
always marching to the front of our minds and fleeting before it is used properly. good for the parts,like repairing watches,so to can be poetry a piece inb the making I have a profile full ,still they are a value binb concept.
in ink,
David