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Submitted by docmaverick on 5 September 2007 - 3:01pm.
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My advice to everyone
learn to laugh at yourself,
your sense of humor will improve
and it’s also good for your health.
Breakdown and cry at a movie
or maybe a nostalgic song,
you must excercise your emotions
if in this world you’re to get along.
Try and be a listener
you’ll make somebody’s day,
you might even be surprised
they may have something to say.
Stay in tune with your Higher Power,
be it Buddah, Mother Nature, or God;
you must praise and pray daily
you’re blessed to have a road which to trod.
Embrace each day you’re given
for too quickly they are gone,
and let love and acceptance
be your advice to everyone.
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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The Line
You must excercise your emotions.
I really love this line doc and I think exercising them is all about allowing yourself to feel them without inhibition :-)
Thanks Doc,
Mark
ps did you get directions on uploading a picture because I tried to message you but - am blocked?