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Submitted by docmaverick on 4 September 2007 - 11:43pm.| Updated 5 September 2007 - 12:43am.
Style / Type:
Western Classic
I have seen my rainstorms
I’ve seen the sunny days,
seen the storms that tease the shore
making all the kinds of clays;
I’ve seen the darkness change to sunlight
the light nourishing all things,
I’ve seen the wind blend all the elements
I’ve seen what the dawn can bring.
I’ve journeyed through the hardships
I’ve weathered every storm,
but had I not endured the cold
I’d have no knowledge of what was warm.
My journey’s slowly winding down
from a fast pace to a crawl,
and the only thing that I can say
is that I surely lived it all!
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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