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Submitted by docmaverick on 31 August 2007 - 8:15am.| Updated 31 August 2007 - 9:15am.
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Our soldiers are overseas
and we’re told what for,
is that it benefits us
to be in this here war.
It’s kind of sureal
being against the ropes,
in honor of our raised flag
they’ve falsly raised our hopes.
So there we go and here we are
fighting on foriegn soil,
and after all the casualities
we’ve raised the price of oil!
Support all of our servicemen
when shove comes down to push,
but who we can no longer support
is our President, George Bush.
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Well, to be very frank
No thinking, caring, open-minded, intelligent person can support Bush. He is a racist warmongering piece of shit.
cheers,
Jess
and very stupid too
cheers,
Jess
Come on, Jess!
You can be frank with us. So tell us what you really think.
Yours,
Chuckles
LOL, don't get me started!
cheers,
Jess