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SAKKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN
India
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Submitted by SAKKTHEE RAVICH... on 24 August 2007 - 8:01am.| Updated 25 August 2007 - 9:30am.
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It was a dim and yellow tungston light
which illuminated my street at nights
Many of my villagers rescued form the dog bites
cause of it’s service ,We survived.
It was the only light of our street but
our street was more than a furlong straight
It would sleep in new moon nights but
it added glory to my street
There were a lot of stories about it
which guarded our cattles in nights
It gave a rank to a poor student
Yes .He is a……….. ……….. …………
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN
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Lovely Story
Thank for sharing this its a great story! Just one thing to watch - spacing missed in line 6 but apart from that this is beautifully crafted!
Kaz
A haunting piece
that comments deeply on our different cultures.
Have you given feedback to anyone else recently?
cheers,
Jess