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Returned to Darkness
Submitted by
SLoEDdie on 23 August 2007 - 3:19am.
i was born into lies
And deceit,
You knew this!
So why
Did you think
i would not know
Where I was
When you took
Me back there?
Not altogether sure I get this one, eddie
is it saying that a loved one, knowing your history, practiced lies and deceit? It’s not quite clear, not that it has to be but perhaps you were so close to it you didn’t consider your reader’s perspective?
Or perhaps I am just thick.
cheers,
Jess
Ouch!
I love the way you put so much power into such tiny poems! Wonderful work! kaz x