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Submitted by paparazii on 11 July 2009 - 5:50am.
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Have you ever love, doubtless
That you could believe all is clear
And fully provided to the brim
Have you ever love, that the world
Seemed everlastingly heaven
With all salvation and glory
Have you ever love, above everything
The rose that was in your hand could
Feel like nothing else, but eternally new
Have you ever love, with all your natural
Privileges, love to love, the mankind confusion
All these precious pleasures you felt
In abundance, given
Have you ever love, that nothing was left
Of you to do, but live each day and night
Rejoicing expecting this to eternity
Have you ever love, latter
To realise that, you’ve loved falsely?
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Have you ever love
Enjoyed this poem. I read your profile and it was very moving. Continue to share your gift with others. GOD’s love is adequate also, eternal. Stay blessed!
Chappel
Thanks buddy, it’s all out of experience, when we’re moved with what we’ve experienced, we’re left longing for something different or the need to go back and review what we missed.
Stay blessed too.
Pleasant days and good nights