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Promise me

Tonight

you’ll find me

And kiss me

Even if only in a dream

 

 

i miss you!

 

3.75
Average: 3.8 (4 votes)
Submitted by purplemoondoll on 19 August 2007 - 4:39am.
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Nice job

short to the point and beautifully crafted - like this a lot

Submitted by ladywriter on 19 August 2007 - 5:45pm.

sloEDdie

I love this piece. Not many words are needed; you said it all. ladywriter

Submitted by charlieweinberg on 20 August 2007 - 4:01am.

your kiss

love it, brilliant, well done. thanks for posting this, it’s great and really difficult to do.
Joyful Noise

Submitted by TONI SEARS on 20 August 2007 - 11:31am.

lonely kiss

SLOeDIE,

This poem is very,warm and gentle, I really like the way it sounds, it is beautiful.

keep doing what you doing

tonisears/akafabulous

Submitted by SLoEDdie on 20 August 2007 - 11:54pm.
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Thanks everyone

for all your support, it means a lot to me and i really appreciate it!

Submitted by Prototype on 23 August 2007 - 4:13pm.
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Nice one!

This one make me go like “awwww…”
This poem it’s like a ice crystal, perfect.

Submitted by himitsu on 25 August 2007 - 12:06am.

lonely kiss

beautiful words from a beautiful soul…

Submitted by barbsdad2003 on 25 August 2007 - 9:37am.
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Charming!

Brief and right to the point make this a charmer.

My congratulations
and thanx,
Chuck

Submitted by himitsu on 30 September 2007 - 10:21am.

lonely kiss

i promise…

Submitted by IKnowNoBox on 30 September 2007 - 9:25pm.
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A poem a whisper

I too wish a lonly kiss.