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Submitted by SLoEDdie on 19 August 2007 - 1:01am.
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freeform
You are the mist
That clouds my mind
Of pain
That hides truths
Behind a seductive kiss
Addictive love
Feelings I’ve long since imagined
Enough lies
Pride doesn’t hide
But
The mist surrounds me
Engulfs me
i see its haze
In all my directions
In all my dreams and happiness
Forced to breath its stench
It smells so good!
i choose to exist in this smog
i desire to hide in this unclear haze
In this love
Your beautiful mist.
(1 vote)
Interesting Poem
Interesting write with some good imagery..
i choose to exist in this smog
i desire to hide in this unclear haze
In this love
Your beautiful mist.
Beautiful
oooh, I shiver
in delighted and repugnant memory of addicted love, a very evocative piece.
cheers,
Jess