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climb in and the heat is electric and old

decaying plastic and hot radio spitting out retro rock

dirty stink of cigarettes

burning engine oil

 

squeak goes the gas pedal

worn smooth to the metal

exposed like the shiny eye of bone

 

press down on this cyclops

and the sedan lurchs sloppily foreward

pulling on its inertia

 

my arm is burning on the ragged fuzz

of doorest

 

i take a lungfull of that vintage scent

passing feilds and barns

dreaming in my wheel machine

 

..O..

 

 

 

just one of many vehicles from my trips down memory road
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Submitted by weirdelf on 18 August 2007 - 1:16am.
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Oh man, you dragged me down that road with you.

back to one of the times I climbed into my old beast,
went fuckit, that jobs sucks anyway,
picked up a couple of mates
and headed up the coast,
to surf and mushrooms.

What a blast today was! Sit down at me ‘puter, fired up NeoPoet and get greeted by poems from you, Lenny, Mark (conect) and Mark on the first page, like running into old friends for the first time!

cheers,
Jess