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Submitted by orgami on 17 August 2007 - 10:46pm.
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waking alive in pre morning light
birds singing exotic trills
my mind thrashing with raw emotion
and burned memories
charred and sooty
they cling to my throat like choked tears
love fills my eyes
and spills from my hurting chest
i cling to my emptiness
and walk the hall of ghosts
hearing their voices soft and soothing
seeing them warm and hollow once
more
their touch
their laughter
i shiver
and turn over
once more
..O..
after a mourning night for all those dead by fate
choice and indifference
(2 votes)
Threw
me into a corridor of silent ghosts. The line ” my mind thrashing with raw emotion and burned memories ” is sublime.
Lenny
Shiver
you raised some of my old ghosts and feelings.
Love beginning and ending, what can we do but turn over once more?
cheers,
Jess