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SAKKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN
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Submitted by SAKKTHEE RAVICH... on 14 August 2007 - 6:48am.| Updated 14 August 2007 - 7:48am.
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It is to my beloved
who showed the heaven in this earth
who gave the wine of glee in her lips and
who gave herself to me to my life
It is to my beloved
My every bits of breath loves her love
My every seconds of life speaks her depth of love
My every walk of life remembers her so
It is to my beloved
I can hear her voice in the midst of huge crowd
I can see her face though I am far away from her
I can talk with her though she is not in this earth hence
It is to my beloved
Stars may loose their light and
Sun may loose it’s heat
Earth may loose it’s wet but
My hear will never loose her
Everything in this earth are for her
My life and soul
Everything in this earth are for her
Cause I live in this earth on her love
SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN
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You are a beautiful passionate poet.
and I see you have listened to Grandpa and Marks feedback. Did you mean “lose” rather than “loose”?
cheers,
Jess