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Submitted by Barbara Writes on 23 April 2009 - 8:54pm.| Updated 27 April 2009 - 10:33am.
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A Mother Weeps (Murder of a little girl)
The sun has set on natural affection
When a mother kills a very young
A innocent little girl taken as she skipped
Unaware of pending danger
Being made in God’s image
No one discerned this violent nature
Of a playmate’s sadistic mother
Against a child that was so precious
A little girl slepted in death by the riverside
Down the road not far from her home
Discarded as waste inside a suitcase
After suffering unimaginable rape and murder
A mother weeps for her child
She’s unconsolable
The fruit of her belly ripped away
By a cruel Sunday school teacher
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
You may have heard of this tragedy
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i wonder where do you get the ideas for your writings? they are powerful.. they really make you think… good job
be blessed,
brandi
Brandi
Thanks for commenting and voting.
Ideas just appear in my head and burn until I decide to write.
I saw the news of families sitting in the church with sad faces and the ideas just started flowing as I begin to write.
~~~~~~~~~
Be whoever you are
At all times, and
Remember that
Because of this, people will
Always
Respect, and
Admire you
©2008Leonard
Respectfully
Yours,
Barbara
the suffer of the innocence
I always said if you can make it to eighteen or around there
you have counquered the curve of the animal hunger
and not all come unscathed
beatings sexual abuse emotional abuse
and murder
always murder of children
the weakest defenceless exposed
by trust in a society that wants to believe in ideals
of a safe god fearing loving world
but it is not so
I see the animals
feel them have known a few
the laws that slap them on the wrists
and return them
safe in at least knowing who they
are
but the ones unknown
like the sunday school woman
jealous or god knows what
that just took this girls life
our media full of the worship of death
the love of gore
in our wars we conquer and kill
maim and blow each other up
men and women now
unending
I heard about this and watched this on the
news And the other one kaylee so horrible
and sad Man is so capable of all
if we truelly think its so hideous to do this
we are blind we are in history rife with this
we must just be versed and aware
and keep our children close enough
aware of dangers
what more can we do
so sad
Great poem commentary about this Barbara
O
I always enjoy reading your lengthy comments. Thanks for commenting and for the awesome vote.
the many gods of this world promotes death and gore
I agree is all over the media influencing people.
i have hope in the one and only true God in the heavens and believe he will end wickedness soon.
The curve of the animal hunger sounds like a great title, and the beginning of a great poem.
~~~~~~~~~
Be whoever you are
At all times, and
Remember that
Because of this, people will
Always
Respect, and
Admire you
©2008Leonard
Respectfully
Yours,
Barbara