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HDGoodman

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Submitted by HDGoodman on 3 August 2007 - 4:54am.
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I visited a dying friend.
And now I’m thinking about a girl.

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Submitted by weirdelf on 6 August 2007 - 8:58am.
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Heya! Welcome back HD, been a while.

two lines and wham.
Right between the eyes, or thighs,
yes, I understand
Very good.
cheers,
Jess