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Docmaverick

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Adam said to God, one day

“I need a reminder of your love.”

And then, God said, “No problem.”

And he sent dog down from above.

Dog’s love and adoration

he gave Adam without fail,

dog loved Adam in spite of himself

dog was happy, and wagged his tail.

Then an angel came to God, and said

“That’s too much to be allowed…

..for Adam basks in adoration,

and he’s becoming much too proud!”

Then God said, “I’ll send Adam a cat,

an animal that won’t obey.

He’ll teach Adam that he’s not supreme

and teach him humility throughout the day.”

Well, God was pleased that Adam improved

the cat was the balance needed there,

Adam’s life went on, and dog wagged his tail,

and cat absolutely didn’t care!

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Submitted by weirdelf on 3 August 2007 - 4:15pm.
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tres cool

wonder why I can’t stand dogs?
they always seem obsequious and sycophantic to me.
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by Feebie on 31 August 2007 - 1:54am.
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A lovely take on the difference between Dog and Cat

Hi Doc Maverick

This was a very cute write i loved this one!!! the difference between Dog and Cat is clearly outlined here!! One of the reasons i have to say i am a Cat person all the way!!!

Thanks for this

Kind regards

Feebie

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