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Docmaverick
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Submitted by docmaverick on 2 August 2007 - 2:01pm.
Style / Type:
Western Classic
Adam said to God, one day
“I need a reminder of your love.”
And then, God said, “No problem.”
And he sent dog down from above.
Dog’s love and adoration
he gave Adam without fail,
dog loved Adam in spite of himself
dog was happy, and wagged his tail.
Then an angel came to God, and said
“That’s too much to be allowed…
..for Adam basks in adoration,
and he’s becoming much too proud!”
Then God said, “I’ll send Adam a cat,
an animal that won’t obey.
He’ll teach Adam that he’s not supreme
and teach him humility throughout the day.”
Well, God was pleased that Adam improved
the cat was the balance needed there,
Adam’s life went on, and dog wagged his tail,
and cat absolutely didn’t care!
(2 votes)

tres cool
wonder why I can’t stand dogs?
they always seem obsequious and sycophantic to me.
cheers,
Jess
A lovely take on the difference between Dog and Cat
Hi Doc Maverick
This was a very cute write i loved this one!!! the difference between Dog and Cat is clearly outlined here!! One of the reasons i have to say i am a Cat person all the way!!!
Thanks for this
Kind regards
Feebie
Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)