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SAKKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN

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TANJORE IN TAMILNADU INDIA,
India

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MY MEMORIES WITH HER
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I was eighteen aged prince of my class
Every one of class were in my squad
None would opposed me
There she entered as a metaphor of beauty
Iwas left alone and isolated
Everyone turned as her worshippers
to attain her love and to speak with her
My lonely seperation made an wound and
that wound inspired myart of poetry
My place and my poemswere highlighted
on the occassion of school day
Yes she came and admired my poetry as outstanding
Finished everything had finished there
But my love on her
continued form that days to still now
Booma, the name that conquered me from my eighteen
to my present fortythree.
It will continue after sixty too.
sorry it will come up to my last sleep

SAKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET

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Submitted by Judith on 1 August 2007 - 10:15am.

Nice work, I like your story

Nice work, I like your story form.

Submitted by purplemoondoll on 1 August 2007 - 3:18pm.
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Lovely Story Telling

This is wonderful - I love the flow, the story everything - great work

Everyone turned as her worshippers
to attain her love and to speak with her
My lonely seperation made an wound and
that wound inspired my art of poetry

This says it all and resonates! Thank u - Kaz x

Submitted by SAKKTHEE RAVICH... on 2 August 2007 - 12:22am.
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SO KIND OF YOU

dear co poet
thanks and so kind of you

Submitted by Will Searles Carman on 19 September 2007 - 2:40pm.

My Memories With Her

Sakthi ~ Which way do you like the spelling of your name? More important, another inspired poem. I must confess, I became an octogenarian (80 years old) this past April so you could call me Grampa Will if you’d like. I just want you to know how much I admire your work! It is subtle in a way, but its meaning is clear. This is the kind of poetry I find most enjoyable. I will continue to look for your posted work, my friend. God bless you. Will