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Docmaverick
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Submitted by docmaverick on 27 July 2007 - 3:31am.
Style / Type:
Western Classic
Give me several million hours
and I wouldn’t have a clue,
how to write down in that time
all I love about you.
Give me a rainbow of colors
and bring the paint by the cart,
and there wouldn’t be enough paint
to capture the love in my heart.
Take all the angel’s voices
singing out in unison,
and the song would be for you
and would never be quite done.
For if you give me one look
or one smile, or a glance,
that’s all it takes for my heart
to flourish and to dance!
For you are the catalyst of my soul-what can I say?
You’re my reason for breathing
yet, you take my breath away.
Love always inspires.
(4 votes)
for all the bilions
of poems written for love, you have managed to write something new, congrats.
one crit
the 3rd last line could be split or re-written
cheers,
Jess
Left me breathless
The title may be well used but the content is brillant and fresh! I really enjoyed reading this -Thank u - Kaz x