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Docmaverick

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Western Classic

Completing half the needed schooling

or doing only half the work,

paying only half the total

of the bill, to the sales clerk;

using only half a map

with which to travel by,

these half measure you could do,

but of course, they wouldn’t fly.

Exerting only half the effort

to make a relationship complete,

only speaking in half sentences

or only crossing half the street;

signing only half your signature

or ordering half a piece of pie,

these half measures you could do

but of course, they wouldn’t fly.

Just a humorous way of looking at not doing your best.
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Submitted by weirdelf on 27 July 2007 - 1:13am.
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comical and true

and somehow strangely poignant. It is more than it seems.
I think you might enjoy barbdad’s works, check him out.
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by docmaverick on 27 July 2007 - 3:17am.
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thanks

I’ll look into barbdad’s work. I really appreciated your help. I need to find my focus; if you only knew. I’m all over the place. Ah, such is life. doc.